I have edited this by firstly adding an issue number underneath the right side of the title along with the issue date.
I have also added a positioning statement 'music is life' underneath the left corner of the title.
Moreover I have removed some of my coverlines as before hand I had too many.
Next I added a 'strip' to the bottom of the page. reduced the size of the bar code and removed the space between the coverlines and the sublines.
And lastly I changed the coverline of the main subline as 'Successful Failure - Gothic metal's new gods' did not suggest the female image.